In Reply to: Re: (Looooost...in translation) posted by PeAK on March 17, 2007 at 08:12:30:
"Shoter is more powerful"
"Break up a long sentance into smaller ones"Your writing style also leaves something to be desired.
"It can also play any ripped CD and can also create playlists on the fly."
You don't need "can also" 2 times and playlists is not a word. Why not write
It can also play any ripped CD and create play lists on the fly.
"So it seems that old technology, had a certain quality in its delivery, materially improved soundstage, but less bass."
Overuse of commas, improper use of punctuation, and a missing adjective for quality.
So it seems that the old technology had a certain improved quality in its delivery; materially improving soundstage but providing less bass.
I’m not intending to get into a pissing contest about spelling and grammar, and I'm sure you can find some errors in my grammar as well, but my point is simply this. If I wanted to be the language police I would be embarrassed to critique a post with one containing spelling and grammar errors as yours does.
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Follow Ups
- If you are going to criticize his writing style then use proper grammar and a spell checker - hermanesque 18:58:19 03/18/07 (3)
- Re: ...use proper grammar and a spell checker - PeAK 04:48:03 03/19/07 (2)
- So it is do as I say not do as I do? - hermanesque 11:13:46 03/19/07 (1)
- Re: So it is do as I say not do as I do? - chris.redmond2@bushinternet.com 10:18:56 03/23/07 (0)